eive
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Post by eive on Dec 26, 2011 22:14:55 GMT -5
Name: Roofie
Level: 4
HP: 64
Classes: Mystic, Gaurdian
Strength: 16 +3
Dexterity: 9 -1
Constitution: 12 +1
Intelligence: 10 0
Wisdom: 16 +3
Charisma: 6 -4
List of Features: Charmed, Borrow, Sponge, Light Screen, Reflect, Shared Struggle
Items:10 Pokeballs, Foods, Clothes, Rope.
Description: Roofie is a boy. On the ride over he held himself carefully. He is about average height for a 10 year old. He spent most of the ride staring out the side of the boat. <I wanna do that thing that Micah and I talked about.>
Pokemon: Unown (Lvl 10), and Cryogonal (Lvl 10) Nickname Snowy.
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Post by eive on Dec 26, 2011 22:18:59 GMT -5
Nickname:
Species: Unown
Type: Psychic
Nature: Modest
HP: 31
Moves: Indeterminate
Ability: Telekinetic
Hit Points: 7
Attack: 5
Defense: 7
Special Attack: 12
Special Defense: 7
Speed: 6
Held Item: Shell Bell
Capabilities: Surface 1, Sky 6, Power 1, Int 5,
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Post by eive on Dec 26, 2011 22:22:51 GMT -5
Nickname: Snowy
Species: Cryogonal
Type: Ice
Nature: Quiet
HP: 37
Moves: Bind, Ice Shard, Sharpen
Ability: Levitate
Hit Points: 9
Attack: 7
Defense: 6
Special Attack: 13
Special Defense: 15
Speed: 11
Held Item:
Capabilities:
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Post by Micah on Dec 27, 2011 22:20:44 GMT -5
OK, your pokemon are good, but their are three problems with your character:
1. You have to many features. Taking a class counts as a feature so you can't get a feature during the level you take a class except the two that it gives you. You have 8 features when you should have 6. 4 from levels where you took classes and 2 from the two levels you didn't.
2. You have one less stat point then you should. Maybe you forgot abou the +1 strength bonus that taking guardian gives you?
3. Your hitpoints should be 4 higher.
Other than that it looks good. The thing that was talked about earlier is indeed in effect.
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eive
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Post by eive on Dec 27, 2011 23:25:39 GMT -5
Both classes I took have 2 features that come with the class. I think. I dunno
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Post by Micah on Dec 28, 2011 5:34:40 GMT -5
Yes, both come with two features, but that still makes 6 and not 8. A level where you took a class and thus got 2 features, a level where you took a different class and got another two features, then two levels where you got one feature each level. So in total you should have 6 features, but instead you have eight.
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eive
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Post by eive on Dec 28, 2011 14:09:12 GMT -5
ohhhhhhhhh. Kay.
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