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Post by rlnisly12 on Aug 7, 2013 22:46:17 GMT -5
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Post by Batiro on Aug 8, 2013 0:29:09 GMT -5
...what are your values for your skills?
Also your stats on Shroomish are messed up, your Speed has to be lower than your SDEF. Golett's HP has to be higher than its SDEF, which also must be lower than its DEF and Speed.
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Post by rlnisly12 on Aug 8, 2013 0:35:08 GMT -5
whoops! thats just the rank in number form correct? untrained = 2, novice = 3, etc?
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Post by Batiro on Aug 8, 2013 0:41:26 GMT -5
Yes sir it is!
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Post by Blank05 on Aug 8, 2013 0:45:27 GMT -5
also, you dont meet the requirements for medic or if that's supposed to be the medic training edge, that either.
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Post by rlnisly12 on Aug 8, 2013 0:50:40 GMT -5
good catch buddy! made the changes, after much deliberation.
Edit: this is why i always love proof readers
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Post by anonyman on Aug 8, 2013 10:12:40 GMT -5
You cannot add more than 5 to any one stat at character creation (you added 8 to speed). You need to be more clear what your features are. Medic and Medic training are two different things; one is a class, one an edge. I know which ones you mean, but you should always be clear for GM use and such.
Your base stats, like Batiro mentioned, are still way off. They must maintain the same ratios as they started after you put in points. Speed cannot be higher than special defense on shroomish, and special defense cannot be higher than defense OR equal to speed and HP.
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Post by rlnisly12 on Aug 8, 2013 10:49:19 GMT -5
i was really confused with shroomish, so many of his main stats were tied tht i didnt know which one was his main stat, isnt the rule that all stats simply must be under the main stat?
EDIT: i just had a brain fart clear up, i finally understand stating pokemon, thank you anonymon and Batiro! Fixed(?) all though another look through would be nice!
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Post by Trulhammaren on Aug 8, 2013 11:14:19 GMT -5
Your shroomish SpAtk should be 2 at this point.
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Post by rlnisly12 on Aug 8, 2013 11:23:28 GMT -5
there we go, deleted the code for the SpAtk stat by mistake, fixed, and fixed. Thank you Trulhammaren!
EDIT: lots of code got messed up, put both mons on new sheets. Thanks to everyone for helping me out! (and probably for helping me out more in the future!)
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Post by rlnisly12 on Aug 15, 2013 17:29:39 GMT -5
Quick thought: As I've spent some time playing as my character I think Im moving more away from him being a villainous mastermind. I still want him to skirt the law, but more in a sense to serve himself and those who he thinks needs it. Thoughts?
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Post by Blank05 on Aug 15, 2013 17:32:20 GMT -5
So an alignment change from chaotic neutral to chaotic good. lol
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Post by rlnisly12 on Aug 15, 2013 19:52:49 GMT -5
More like chaotic evil to chaotic neutral.
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Post by Blank05 on Feb 25, 2014 23:44:02 GMT -5
Just thought I'd leave this here:
The fog falls of the massive creature in sheets and you can see something that looks like a butterfree mixed with an eldritch abomination. It is massive, bloated and white, with metapod and caterpie hanging off of its body. Instead of wings, it has thousands of feelers that spread out behind it, attaching to trees and pulling its great bulk up from under the fog. One of these tendrils touches each of you and it speaks into your mind. "Run. I will keep these unbelievers from stopping your dinner date with Zapdos."
Sweet dreams, buddy ^_~
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